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Post by Cate on Oct 29, 2012 14:15:07 GMT -5
The end is near for man. They had their chance to rise, But they did fall. They thought they had power. They never thought it would happen: descent. It is their time.
They are not ready for their time; The ever unprepared man. They only want to rise, But they are causing their own fall. They all strive for power, And call for each others' descent.
They caused their leaders' descent, Before the end of his time. They are a foolish race; man. On their own, they thought they would rise. The great "democracy" did fall. They tried to take all the power.
It's a dangerous thing, power. It can cause All's descent. All will run out of time. They are a sad race, man. They will never again rise. All that is left is to fall.
It will commense, the great fall. The fight for more power Has caused their descent. It is up; their time. It is a sad day to be apart of man. All hell will soon rise.
The selfish pride will rise, No matter how far they fall. All they want is power. That want is causing their descent. It is only a matter of time Before the final farewell to man.
The strive for power has made all begin their descent before their time. Man had their rise, but now they must fall.
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Post by Idazle on Oct 29, 2012 16:23:16 GMT -5
Cool! Great idea! Shouldn't words 123 and 456 be paired as such in the last stanza? I've never seen one with four of the words in one line. Typically, it's supposed to be 654/321, but I could be wrong. That's just what my book of poetry says. Aside from that, that was a really amazing poem! You should definitely use this at poetry night!
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Post by Cate on Oct 30, 2012 12:01:26 GMT -5
I have no clue how that's supposed to be set up. I forgot the paper for it in my locker.
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Post by Idazle on Oct 30, 2012 20:00:42 GMT -5
Typically, it is 6-5-4 and 3-2-1. Her paper just says 1-2-3 and 4-5-6.
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Post by Cate on Oct 30, 2012 20:09:13 GMT -5
Then I shall fix it. Just make a comma into a period and make another line! MWAHAHAHA!!!!
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Post by Idazle on Oct 30, 2012 20:10:54 GMT -5
That works! Whoop! So excited! You should definitely share this one at Poetry Night.
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Post by momo on Nov 3, 2012 20:01:57 GMT -5
i like this one =)
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