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Post by Idazle on Jul 11, 2012 7:42:13 GMT -5
((This is an experiment in connotation and denotation. What is the definition of this ruler?))
The land is all his. He is the ruler, The leader, The King. The ruler measures out his kingdom, Judging what is his, And protecting those within his bounds. The ruler counts it out, Leaving no amount unmeasured. His decisions are clear and definite. And without him, There would be no distance, No kingdom, No domain. And so the ruler sits and waits, Until he is needed once more.
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Post by momo on Nov 3, 2012 22:19:54 GMT -5
i like how the ruler seem so in control of everything in your poem. Its reassuring, like a father, to the reader, witch is the kind of ruler you want to have lol
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Post by Idazle on Nov 4, 2012 8:05:22 GMT -5
Thanks for your input, Momo!
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